Hey bloggers this week i have to blog what i have worked on in inquiry and its been awesome learning about avalanches and music it was hard to do the Body Percussions but I've learnt how to now but here is my information report on avalanches.
Hey bloggers this week i have to blog what i have worked on in inquiry and its been awesome learning about avalanches and music it was hard to do the Body Percussions but I've learnt how to now but here is my information report on avalanches.
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Hi Victoria !
ReplyDeleteYour report was was fine but maybe next time you could put them into sentences .
-Hannaneh
Yes thanks Hannaneh:)
DeleteKia Ora Victoria! Its Karaitiana. I really enjoyed reading your information report! It gave me a lot of knowledge on avalanches. My favourite fact was probably the speed can get up to 300mph! Maybe next time, you could put your information report onto a DLO! For example, google slides or piktochart. Your post was amazing and spectacular! Thanks for sharing it with me!!! What would you do if you were caught in a avalanche or how would you act?
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day
Karaitiana
I would run for my life! haha thanks Karaitiana
DeleteKia ora Victoria
ReplyDeleteI like how you did some fun facts. Next time you could have some more facts.
From Aeryn:) :)
Okay!!
Deletehey victoria
ReplyDeletei love how you add a fun fact thing and how you add your plan so i could see it but next time i think you could add more in your description
Okay thanks for the feedback :)
Deletehi Victoria i liked how you did avalanche it gave me a lot of information but you were supposed to present it on a slideshow or something else like biteable from Zoe:)
ReplyDeleteheeellllllllo Victoria,
ReplyDeletei love your work but maybe you could put it on render forest or something